It's sad to see it looking so empty. Good luck guys, hope it picks up! 
Post by Darkstar100 on Aug 22, 2015 11:57:08 GMT -5
Name: Autumnfur
Age: 31 moons
Gender: She-cat
Overall Appearance: Named for her tortoiseshell fur, Autumnfur is a tortoiseshell and white she-cat with green eyes. She has short fur, and short whiskers. Her eyes are like a light lime green. Her tail is long.
In-Depth Color: Autumnfur has white on her chest and paws, and a white muzzle. The rest of her has black, tan, and some ginger as well. The white on her muzzle goes up a bit to her forehead, and on the left side of her face she has black around her eye. On the other side, there is tan around her eye, but beside that on her cheek it black. (I looked for a picture but i couldnt find one..)
In-Depth Build: Autumnfur is short, but agile. Her small frame can easily slip between trees and rocks, and her paws, which are long, are perfect for catching fish without her shadow over the water. The reason she can leap well is because her back legs are strong.
Personality: Autumnfur is a sweet, caring she-cat. She is considerate towards her Clanmates, thinking about they're feelings. Though, i warn you, she has a very sharp tongue for cats in the wrong! She has little tolerance for mouse-brains. She is caring towards her Clan, but towards enemies, she's as vicious as a hungry wolf facing a deer. She isnt shy, but she isnt brave and courageous, except when shes fighting for her Clanmates. She's kind of in the middle, i suppose. She enjoys meeting new cats, unless they're enemies, which are the other Clans. Of course, she likes kits, unless they're being bad and disobedient. She'll lose her temper if she's annoyed, or sometimes even if she is distressed. She's snappish if she's nervous or distressed. She is a boaster. She'll never give up on something she puts her mind to, which leads her into trouble. she used to be very mischievous as a kit, but she grew out of it.
+ Sweet, Caring, Considerate
- Bad Temper, Snappish, Sharp Tongue
; Intolerant, boaster, determined
Skill Paragraph: Autumnfur is a good swimmer and hunter. She cant catch land prey, such as water voles, as her paw does not allow her to go too fast. She isnt very good of a climber, shes not terrible, however, but sometimes she can get a boost from a rock, or a low branch, and if she gets into a tree, she can jump from a branch to another branch, but only if they arent too far apart, because she tries that constantly and falls, and the last time she fell she injured her front paw. She isnt good at playing games with kits, however, as she feels uncomfortable around kits for some reason.
Positive Skill List: Swimming, fishing
Negative Skill List: Hunting land prey, playing
Average Skill List: Jumping, climbing
Likes: Swimming, fishing, jumping
Dislikes: Mouse-brains, spiders, water voles
Fears: Spiders, failing
Overall History: When Autumnpaw became an apprentice, she climbed her first tree. She then moved up to leaping from the branches happily.
as she became a warrior, Autumnfur leaped from a branch again. As she did, it cracked, and before she knew it she was falling. She jabbed her paws down to catch her fall. As she did, her left paw hit the ground hard and injured her paw. Its not broken, but she limps on it.
In-Depth History: When Autumnfur was young in the nursery, she was very mischievous. She would constantly get in trouble for bugging warriors.
One day, Autumnkit decided she would sneak from camp. After all, she didn't understand yet why kits weren't allowed to leave camp. So, while her mother was asleep, she snuck out.
She was excited on her first expedition outside of the camp walls. She explored everywhere, poking her nose into bushes and playing with lizards. She came across a stream. Curious, she poked her paw into it, but immediately pulled it back out. she gave it a couple vigorous licks and something leaped out of the water and onto the land. Autumnkit recognized it as a fish and sniffed it. It flopped for a while and went still. Once again curious, she picked it up. It was small, fitting perfectly in her small jaws.
As she looked at the sky, Autumnkit realized her mother would be awake by now. She bolted home with the fish and lay it on the pile, then peeked into the nursery. Her mother was still asleep. Autumkit grinned slightly and bolted to her nest and curled up, pretending she was there the whole time.
She never told anyone about her expedition, and probably never will. she doesnt know yet if anyone had seen her, but she thinks if they had, they would have stopped her.
Origins She was born in DappleClan.
Thank you, about the improving thing! 
